Lord of the Flies argues that civilisation is not an inherent quality of humanity but a fragile, artificial construct that collapses when external structures of authority are removed — revealing the innate savagery that lies beneath the surface of even the most 'civilised' individuals.
Point 1
Ralph's insistence on maintaining the signal fire and building shelters represents the civilised impulse to prioritise rescue, order, and collective survival over immediate gratification.
“The fire is the most important thing on the island. How can we ever be rescued except by luck, if we don't keep a fire going?” [Ralph] Chapter 2
- The rhetorical question appeals to reason and logic, establishing Ralph as the voice of civilisation who understands that rescue depends on sustained, cooperative effort rather than impulsive action.
- The fire functions as a symbol of connection to the adult, civilised world — maintaining it requires discipline, self-sacrifice, and the ability to defer gratification, all hallmarks of civilised behaviour that the boys progressively abandon.
- Golding, writing in the shadow of WWII, uses the fire as a test of civilisation's durability: the boys' inability to maintain it mirrors how quickly societies can collapse when collective responsibility is abandoned.
“We've got to have rules and obey them. After all, we're not savages. We're English” [Jack] Chapter 2
- The dramatic irony is devastating: Jack, who will become the novel's chief embodiment of savagery, here associates Englishness with civilisation — a belief Golding systematically dismantles throughout the novel.
- The national pride implicit in 'We're English' reflects post-colonial assumptions about British superiority that Golding, having witnessed the brutality of supposedly civilised nations during WWII, seeks to demolish.
- The conjunction 'After all' reveals that Jack treats civility as a matter of identity rather than effort — he believes civilisation is something the English inherently possess, which makes his descent into savagery all the more powerful as Golding's counter-argument.
Point 2
The conch shell operates as a symbol of democratic order and rational discourse, and its progressive deterioration mirrors the collapse of civilised governance on the island.
“I'll give the conch to the next person to speak. He can hold it when he's speaking” [Ralph] Chapter 2
- The conch establishes a system of turn-taking and respectful discourse that mirrors democratic parliamentary procedure — the right to speak is regulated, ensuring that even the weakest voices can be heard.
- Ralph's declarative statement grants the conch symbolic authority, but Golding reveals that this authority is entirely consensual — the shell has no inherent power, and once the boys withdraw their consent, democratic order collapses entirely.
- The conch represents the social contract theorised by Hobbes and Rousseau: civilisation depends on mutual agreement, and that agreement is only as strong as the willingness of its participants to uphold it.
“The rock struck Piggy a glancing blow from chin to knee; the conch exploded into a thousand white fragments and ceased to exist” [Narrator] Chapter 11
- The simultaneous destruction of the conch and the death of Piggy — the novel's representative of reason and intellect — literalises the collapse of civilisation: both rational thought and democratic order are destroyed in a single act of violence.
- The verb 'exploded' and the phrase 'ceased to exist' convey irreversible annihilation — Golding does not allow the conch to merely break but has it shatter completely, signalling that civilisation cannot be gradually eroded but is violently obliterated.
- Roger's act of pushing the boulder is deliberate and unprovoked, demonstrating that savagery is not merely the absence of civilisation but an active, destructive force that seeks to annihilate the structures of order.
Point 3
Jack's transformation from choirboy to tribal chief dramatises Golding's argument that savagery is not learned but unleashed when the constraints of civilisation are removed.
“He began to dance and his laughter became a bloodthirsty snarling” [Narrator] Chapter 4
- The transformation from 'laughter' — a human, social expression — to 'snarling' — an animalistic, predatory sound — captures in a single sentence the regression from civilised boy to savage hunter.
- The verb 'became' suggests a seamless, almost natural transition, implying that the savagery was always present beneath the surface of Jack's socialised behaviour, waiting to emerge.
- Golding uses the semantic field of animalism throughout Jack's characterisation to argue that the boundary between human civilisation and animal instinct is dangerously thin and easily crossed.
“He looked in astonishment, no longer at himself but at an awesome stranger” [Narrator] Chapter 4
- The face paint creates a mask that liberates Jack from the inhibitions of his civilised identity — he literally cannot recognise himself, suggesting that savagery requires the erasure of individual, socialised selfhood.
- The adjective 'awesome' in its original sense of inspiring awe and fear signals that Jack's transformation is not merely behavioural but almost supernatural — the paint does not disguise him but reveals a deeper, more primal self.
- Golding draws on anthropological ideas about masks and ritual identity: the painted face allows Jack to act without personal moral responsibility, anticipating the deindividuation observed in WWII atrocities where uniforms enabled ordinary people to commit violence.
Point 4
The murder of Simon during the frenzied dance represents the complete triumph of savagery over civilisation — the boys destroy the one person who understood the truth about the beast.
“The beast struggled forward, broke the ring, and fell over the steep edge of the rock to the sand by the water. At once the crowd surged after it, poured down the rock, leapt on to the beast, screamed, struck, bit, tore” [Narrator] Chapter 9
- The asyndetic list — 'screamed, struck, bit, tore' — removes conjunctions to create a breathless, frenzied rhythm that mirrors the uncontrollable momentum of mob violence, each verb more savage than the last.
- Simon is referred to as 'the beast' rather than by name, revealing that the boys' projection of evil onto an external creature has become a self-fulfilling prophecy — they create the very violence they feared by attacking the one person who could have saved them from it.
- Golding deliberately sets the murder during a storm and a ritual dance, echoing both primitive sacrifice and the crowd psychology that enabled mass atrocities during WWII — civilisation does not merely fade but is actively overwhelmed by collective savagery.
“the parachute took the figure forward, furrowing the lagoon, and the figure sank” [Narrator] Chapter 9
- The dead parachutist — the boys' supposed 'beast' — drifts away at the moment Simon is killed, creating a devastating irony: the external beast departs because the real beast has fully manifested in the boys themselves.
- The gentle, almost serene language describing the parachutist's departure contrasts starkly with the brutal frenzy of Simon's murder, highlighting the gap between the imagined external threat and the real internal one.
- Golding connects the parachutist — a dead airman from the adult world's war — to the boys' violence, arguing that the savagery on the island is not an aberration but a microcosm of the same darkness that produces global conflict.
Lord of the Flies — Civilisation vs Savagery — GCSE Literature Revision