Language
Technique
Example
What It Reveals
Symbolic description
"The conch was silent, a gleaming tusk"
Golding imbues objects with layered symbolic meaning — the conch is simultaneously a practical tool and a symbol of democratic authority; calling it a 'tusk' associates it with something precious yet fragile, foreshadowing the destruction of civilised order.
Pathetic fallacy
"The blue-white scar was constant, the noise unendurable" — the storm before Simon's death
Nature mirrors and intensifies the boys' moral descent — the violent storm during Simon's murder implicates the natural world in the killing, suggesting that the island itself participates in the savagery or reflects the chaos within the boys.
Simile
"The three boys walked briskly on the sand. The tide was low and there was a strip of weed-strewn beach that was almost as firm as a road" / "A thing was crawling out of the forest. It came darkly, uncertainly... like a flame"
Similes shift from the familiar and civilised to the primal and terrifying — early similes compare the island to known, safe things; later similes draw from fire, darkness, and animality, tracking the boys' psychological regression.
Metaphor
"The mask was a thing on its own, behind which Jack hid, liberated from shame and self-consciousness"
The face paint becomes a metaphor for the erasure of civilised identity — the 'mask' allows Jack to shed moral responsibility; Golding implies that savagery is not something imposed but something revealed when the constraints of society are removed.
Personification
"The sea breathed again in a long, slow sigh" / "Even the sounds of nightmare from the other shelters no longer reached him"
The island is given life and agency through personification — the breathing sea and sighing wind create an atmosphere where nature is a living presence, sometimes benign and sometimes threatening, reflecting the boys' shifting relationship with their environment.
Violent imagery
"Roger, with a sense of delirious abandonment, leaned all his weight on the lever... the rock struck Piggy a glancing blow from chin to knee"
Golding describes violence with precise, unflinching detail — the clinical specificity forces the reader to confront the physical reality of murder rather than abstracting it, making the descent into savagery viscerally horrifying rather than merely symbolic.
Sensory language
"The heat hit him. He was bathed in sweat" / "The stink of pig droppings" / "The pile of guts was a black blob of flies"
Golding saturates the narrative with heat, smell, sweat, and decay — the relentless sensory detail creates a claustrophobic, oppressive atmosphere that mirrors the boys' psychological pressure and the rotting of their civilised values.
Biblical / religious allusions
"Simon found for them the fruit they could not reach" / "The Lord of the Flies" (Beelzebub)
Simon is cast as a Christ-like figure who feeds others and seeks truth, only to be killed by the mob — the title itself translates 'Beelzebub' (lord of the flies/devil), framing the novel as a parable about humanity's encounter with innate evil.
Colour imagery
"His face was dark with the violent pleasure of making this outrageously bad thing" / "The dark canopy" / "bright, desperate, forced"
Golding uses colour symbolically throughout — darkness and blackness associate with savagery and moral blindness, while the initial brightness of the island and the lagoon represents innocence; the gradual darkening of the prose tracks the moral descent.
Primitive / savage diction
"Kill the beast! Cut his throat! Spill his blood!" / "He began to dance and his laughter became a bloodthirsty snarling"
The boys' language degenerates from articulate English into rhythmic, monosyllabic chanting — the diction itself enacts the regression from civilisation to savagery, with complex thought giving way to primal, repetitive commands.
Chanting / rhythmic language
"Kill the pig. Cut her throat. Bash her in." / "Kill the beast! Cut his throat! Spill his blood!"
The chant evolves from hunting ritual to murderous frenzy — its rhythmic, hypnotic quality shows how group ritual dissolves individual moral responsibility; the escalation from 'pig' to 'beast' reveals the dangerous slippage from animal to human prey.
Irony
"Ralph wept for the end of innocence, the darkness of man's heart, and the fall through the air of the true, wise friend called Piggy"
The rescue by a naval officer is deeply ironic — the adult world that saves the boys is itself engaged in a nuclear war, suggesting that the savagery on the island is not childish aberration but a microcosm of adult civilisation's own violence.
Animal imagery
"He became absorbed beyond mere happiness as he felt himself exercising control over living things. He talked to them, urging them, ordering them" / "Jack was on top of the sow, stabbing downward"
The boys are progressively described in animal terms while animals become their victims — the blurring of the human-animal boundary suggests that the 'beast' the boys fear is not an external creature but their own regression to predatory instinct.
Lord of the Flies — Writer’s Toolkit: Language — GCSE Literature Revision