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Lord of the Flies6 sections · A4 printable

Maybe there is a beast... maybe it's only us.

Language

Technique

Example

What It Reveals

Symbolic description

"The conch was silent, a gleaming tusk"

Golding imbues objects with layered symbolic meaning — the conch is simultaneously a practical tool and a symbol of democratic authority; calling it a 'tusk' associates it with something precious yet fragile, foreshadowing the destruction of civilised order.

Pathetic fallacy

"The blue-white scar was constant, the noise unendurable" — the storm before Simon's death

Nature mirrors and intensifies the boys' moral descent — the violent storm during Simon's murder implicates the natural world in the killing, suggesting that the island itself participates in the savagery or reflects the chaos within the boys.

Simile

"The three boys walked briskly on the sand. The tide was low and there was a strip of weed-strewn beach that was almost as firm as a road" / "A thing was crawling out of the forest. It came darkly, uncertainly... like a flame"

Similes shift from the familiar and civilised to the primal and terrifying — early similes compare the island to known, safe things; later similes draw from fire, darkness, and animality, tracking the boys' psychological regression.

Metaphor

"The mask was a thing on its own, behind which Jack hid, liberated from shame and self-consciousness"

The face paint becomes a metaphor for the erasure of civilised identity — the 'mask' allows Jack to shed moral responsibility; Golding implies that savagery is not something imposed but something revealed when the constraints of society are removed.

Personification

"The sea breathed again in a long, slow sigh" / "Even the sounds of nightmare from the other shelters no longer reached him"

The island is given life and agency through personification — the breathing sea and sighing wind create an atmosphere where nature is a living presence, sometimes benign and sometimes threatening, reflecting the boys' shifting relationship with their environment.

Violent imagery

"Roger, with a sense of delirious abandonment, leaned all his weight on the lever... the rock struck Piggy a glancing blow from chin to knee"

Golding describes violence with precise, unflinching detail — the clinical specificity forces the reader to confront the physical reality of murder rather than abstracting it, making the descent into savagery viscerally horrifying rather than merely symbolic.

Sensory language

"The heat hit him. He was bathed in sweat" / "The stink of pig droppings" / "The pile of guts was a black blob of flies"

Golding saturates the narrative with heat, smell, sweat, and decay — the relentless sensory detail creates a claustrophobic, oppressive atmosphere that mirrors the boys' psychological pressure and the rotting of their civilised values.

Biblical / religious allusions

"Simon found for them the fruit they could not reach" / "The Lord of the Flies" (Beelzebub)

Simon is cast as a Christ-like figure who feeds others and seeks truth, only to be killed by the mob — the title itself translates 'Beelzebub' (lord of the flies/devil), framing the novel as a parable about humanity's encounter with innate evil.

Colour imagery

"His face was dark with the violent pleasure of making this outrageously bad thing" / "The dark canopy" / "bright, desperate, forced"

Golding uses colour symbolically throughout — darkness and blackness associate with savagery and moral blindness, while the initial brightness of the island and the lagoon represents innocence; the gradual darkening of the prose tracks the moral descent.

Primitive / savage diction

"Kill the beast! Cut his throat! Spill his blood!" / "He began to dance and his laughter became a bloodthirsty snarling"

The boys' language degenerates from articulate English into rhythmic, monosyllabic chanting — the diction itself enacts the regression from civilisation to savagery, with complex thought giving way to primal, repetitive commands.

Chanting / rhythmic language

"Kill the pig. Cut her throat. Bash her in." / "Kill the beast! Cut his throat! Spill his blood!"

The chant evolves from hunting ritual to murderous frenzy — its rhythmic, hypnotic quality shows how group ritual dissolves individual moral responsibility; the escalation from 'pig' to 'beast' reveals the dangerous slippage from animal to human prey.

Irony

"Ralph wept for the end of innocence, the darkness of man's heart, and the fall through the air of the true, wise friend called Piggy"

The rescue by a naval officer is deeply ironic — the adult world that saves the boys is itself engaged in a nuclear war, suggesting that the savagery on the island is not childish aberration but a microcosm of adult civilisation's own violence.

Animal imagery

"He became absorbed beyond mere happiness as he felt himself exercising control over living things. He talked to them, urging them, ordering them" / "Jack was on top of the sow, stabbing downward"

The boys are progressively described in animal terms while animals become their victims — the blurring of the human-animal boundary suggests that the 'beast' the boys fear is not an external creature but their own regression to predatory instinct.

Structural Techniques

Technique

Example / Description

Effect / Purpose

Chronological descent into savagery

The narrative moves from the boys' initial excitement and democratic assemblies through increasing disorder to murder and total breakdown

Golding structures the novel as a steady, irreversible decline — the chronological progression mirrors humanity's fall from grace, suggesting that without the structures of civilisation, moral collapse is not sudden but gradual and inevitable.

Parallel leadership (Ralph vs Jack)

Ralph's democratic assemblies and focus on the signal fire are consistently juxtaposed with Jack's authoritarian hunting and obsession with killing

The dual leadership creates an escalating structural tension — Golding forces the reader to watch democracy and dictatorship compete in real time, with each chapter shifting the balance of power further toward Jack's violent tribalism.

Key turning points

The fire dies and a ship passes (Ch. 4), Simon's murder (Ch. 9), Piggy's death and the conch's destruction (Ch. 11)

Each turning point marks an irreversible step in the collapse of order — the missed rescue destroys hope, Simon's death destroys innocence, and Piggy's death destroys reason; Golding structures the novel around these three devastating losses.

Escalating violence

From hunting pigs → killing Simon in a frenzy → the deliberate murder of Piggy → the organised hunt for Ralph

The violence escalates from animal to accidental to intentional to systematic — Golding's structural escalation demonstrates that once the taboo against violence is broken, each subsequent act becomes easier and more extreme.

The beast's evolution

From 'snake-thing' → 'beast from water' → 'beast from air' (parachutist) → 'the beast was harmless and horrible' → the Lord of the Flies' revelation: 'I'm part of you'

The beast evolves structurally from external threat to internal truth — Golding uses the changing nature of the beast to gradually reveal the novel's central thesis: that evil is not an outside force but an innate human quality.

Loss of civilised structures

Assemblies become chaotic → rules are ignored → the conch loses authority → shelters decay → names are forgotten → rescue becomes irrelevant to most boys

Golding systematically dismantles every marker of civilisation — each loss (rules, shelter, names, purpose) represents another layer of social order stripped away, exposing the savagery that Golding argues lies beneath.

Foreshadowing

"He says the beastie came in the dark" / Roger throws stones near Henry but is restrained by "the taboo of the old life" — foreshadowing his later, uninhibited violence

Early hints of darkness prepare the reader for later horrors — Roger's restrained stone-throwing foreshadows his murder of Piggy; the boys' early fear of the beast foreshadows its eventual manifestation as their own savagery.

Climactic hunt

The final chapter reverses the novel's premise — Ralph, the former leader and symbol of civilisation, becomes the hunted prey

The structural inversion of hunter and hunted completes the novel's moral arc — civilisation is not just defeated but actively pursued for destruction; Ralph's terror mirrors the reader's horror at how completely order has collapsed.

Ironic rescue

A naval officer arrives, drawn by the fire the hunters set to smoke out Ralph — the fire intended to kill ultimately saves

The deus ex machina ending is deliberately unsatisfying — the officer represents a 'civilised' world that is itself waging nuclear war; Golding refuses the reader a comforting resolution, insisting that the island is a mirror, not an aberration.

Cyclical elements

The novel begins and ends with Ralph — first exploring the island in wonder, finally weeping on the beach in despair

The cyclical framing emphasises transformation through trauma — Ralph's journey from innocent excitement to devastating self-knowledge creates a before-and-after structure that measures the full extent of what has been lost.

Isolation as pressure

The island setting removes all adult authority, legal systems, and social institutions, creating a controlled experiment in human nature

Golding structures the island as a laboratory — the removal of external constraints is the novel's foundational structural device, allowing him to test his thesis that civilisation is a thin veneer over innate savagery.

Progressive destruction of order

Assemblies → factions → tribes → war; the conch moves from supreme authority to irrelevance to physical destruction

The structural arc mirrors a political trajectory from democracy through factionalism to totalitarianism — Golding compresses centuries of political philosophy into a single narrative, arguing that this regression is humanity's natural direction without constant vigilance.

Narrative Techniques

Technique

Example / Description

Purpose / Effect

Third-person omniscient narrator

The narrator moves freely between characters' thoughts: 'Ralph too was fighting to get near... The desire to squeeze and hurt was over-mastering'

Omniscience allows Golding to reveal the inner savagery of even sympathetic characters — the reader sees Ralph's own violent impulses, preventing any comfortable division between 'good' and 'bad' boys and reinforcing the universality of the darkness within.

Symbolic landscape description

"The reef enclosed more than one side of the island, lying behind its own lagoon... The palm trees stood or leaned or reclined against the light and their green feathers were a hundred feet up in the air"

The island is described as both paradise and prison — the enclosed lagoon, the reef, and the dense jungle create a setting that is simultaneously Edenic and claustrophobic, mirroring the boys' initial delight and eventual entrapment.

Stream of consciousness (Simon)

"What else is there to do?... Fancy thinking the Beast was something you could hunt and kill!"

Simon's interior passages are the novel's most philosophically profound moments — his hallucinatory conversation with the Lord of the Flies uses stream of consciousness to dramatise the moment when truth breaks through: the beast is humanity itself.

Free indirect discourse

"Not them. Not them. He forgot his wounds, his hunger and thirst, and became fear" — Ralph's thoughts bleed into the narrative voice

Golding blurs the boundary between narrator and character — free indirect discourse immerses the reader in the boys' terror and confusion, making the emotional experience of the narrative immediate and inescapable.

Dramatic irony

The boys hunt and kill Simon while chanting about killing the beast — Simon, who has discovered the truth about the beast, IS the beast they kill

The reader knows what the boys do not — that Simon carries the truth that could save them; his murder is therefore not just tragic but catastrophically ironic, as the boys destroy the one person who understands their situation.

Allegory

The entire novel operates as an allegory: the island is civilisation, Ralph is democratic governance, Jack is totalitarian power, Piggy is intellect, Simon is spiritual insight, Roger is sadism unchecked by law

The allegorical framework transforms a boys' adventure into a philosophical treatise on human nature — every character, object, and event carries symbolic weight, allowing Golding to dramatise abstract ideas about civilisation, power, and evil.

Fable-like simplicity

The premise is deliberately simple: boys stranded on an island without adults, forced to govern themselves

The stripped-down, fable-like setup allows Golding to isolate his central question — by removing all complicating factors (adults, technology, institutions), he creates a pure test of whether human beings are inherently good or evil.

Setting as character

"The heat hit him. Even the butterflies deserted the open space where the obscene thing grinned and dripped" — the clearing where the Lord of the Flies sits

The island responds to and reflects the boys' actions — as their behaviour becomes more violent, the landscape descriptions become more oppressive, sinister, and suffocating, as though the island itself is being corrupted by their presence.

Violence described with detachment

"Piggy fell forty feet and landed on his back across the square red rock in the sea. His head opened and stuff came out and turned red"

The clinical, matter-of-fact narration of Piggy's death is more shocking than emotional language would be — the word 'stuff' reduces a human brain to anonymous matter, and the detached tone mirrors the desensitisation that has overtaken the boys.

Child's perspective vs adult understanding

"The littluns talked and cried out to each other and the darkness was full of claws" — children's fears described with adult narrative insight

Golding sustains a tension between the children's limited understanding and the narrator's wider knowledge — the reader sees the boys' confusion but understands the adult implications, creating a persistent, unsettling gap between innocence and meaning.

Interior monologue

"If faces were different when lit from above or below — what was a face? What was anything?" — Ralph's disintegrating thought process

Ralph's interior monologue tracks his psychological decline — his struggle to hold on to rational thought ('the curtain flapped in his head') dramatises the fragility of civilised thinking under the pressure of fear and isolation.

The naval officer's perspective shift

"I should have thought that a pack of British boys... would have been able to put up a better show than that"

The officer's naive, patronising reaction creates a final, devastating irony — he sees the boys through the lens of imperial adventure stories (like Coral Island), completely failing to understand what the reader has witnessed; his warship in the background confirms that adult civilisation is no less savage.

Form and Genre

Form / Technique

Description

Effect / Purpose

Allegorical novel

Each character and object represents an abstract concept: Ralph (democracy/order), Jack (dictatorship/savagery), Piggy (intellect/reason), Simon (spiritual truth), Roger (sadism/unchecked violence)

The allegorical framework transforms a survival story into a philosophical argument — Golding uses narrative fiction to dramatise abstract ideas about human nature, making his thesis accessible, emotionally compelling, and impossible to dismiss as mere theory.

Dystopian fiction

The boys' society degenerates from democratic cooperation into a violent, fear-based dictatorship — a dystopia created by children

Golding inverts the typical dystopian formula — instead of an imposed tyranny, the dystopia emerges organically from human nature; the horror lies not in external oppression but in the discovery that people will create their own dystopia when freed from constraint.

Adventure story subverted

The premise echoes Ballantyne's The Coral Island (1857) — three boys stranded on an island — but Golding systematically destroys the optimistic adventure-story genre

By subverting the boys' adventure genre, Golding attacks Victorian and Edwardian assumptions about British superiority and childhood innocence — the naval officer's final reference to Coral Island makes this inversion explicit and devastating.

Fable

A simple narrative with a clear moral lesson about human nature — the stripped-down setting and archetypal characters function like figures in a parable

The fable form gives the novel universal application — by reducing society to its simplest elements (children, an island, no adults), Golding creates a story that speaks to all human communities, not just the specific boys on this specific island.

Robinsonade (Coral Island inversion)

The Robinsonade genre (after Robinson Crusoe) celebrates European ingenuity and mastery over nature — Golding's island resists mastery and reveals human inadequacy

Golding directly inverts the Robinsonade tradition — where Defoe and Ballantyne showed civilisation triumphing over wilderness, Golding shows wilderness triumphing within the civilised; the genre inversion is itself the novel's argument.

Political allegory

The conflict between Ralph's democracy and Jack's tribal authoritarianism mirrors the political tensions of the twentieth century: democracy vs fascism, reason vs demagoguery

Writing in the aftermath of WWII, Golding uses political allegory to warn that fascism is not an aberration but a permanent human temptation — the ease with which the boys abandon democracy for Jack's violent rule is a commentary on how quickly civilisation can collapse.

Psychological novel

The narrative explores the boys' inner lives — Ralph's struggling thought processes, Jack's liberating descent into violence, Simon's mystical insights, Roger's emerging sadism

Golding treats the island as a psychological landscape — the external conflicts between the boys are dramatisations of internal conflicts within the human psyche, and the novel's real territory is the mind rather than the island.

Moral fable

The novel presents a clear moral argument: that human beings carry an innate capacity for evil which civilisation restrains but cannot eliminate

The moral fable form demands the reader engage with Golding's thesis — unlike a purely realistic novel, the fable insists on interpretation and application; the reader is challenged to accept or refute the proposition that 'the darkness of man's heart' is universal.

Symbolism and Motifs

Symbol / Motif

Meaning / Context

Example Use

The conch

Democracy, civilised order, and the right to speak — whoever holds the conch has authority in the assembly

'We can use this to call the others. Have a meeting. They'll come when they hear us' — the conch establishes democratic governance; its progressive loss of power tracks the decline of order, and its shattering alongside Piggy's death marks the final destruction of civilisation.

Piggy's glasses

Intellect, reason, science, and the power of clear-sighted thinking — the glasses are the only means of making fire

'His specs — use them as burning glasses!' — the glasses represent the practical application of reason; their theft by Jack symbolises the appropriation of intellectual power by brute force, and Piggy's increasing blindness mirrors reason's declining influence.

The beast

The primal fear within each boy — initially an external monster, ultimately revealed as an internal truth about human nature

'Fancy thinking the Beast was something you could hunt and kill!' — Simon's insight reveals that the beast is not a creature but a condition; the boys' desperate attempts to locate and kill it externally prevent them from confronting the savagery within themselves.

The Lord of the Flies (pig's head)

The pig's head on a stick, offered as a sacrifice to the beast — 'Lord of the Flies' translates the Hebrew 'Beelzebub' (a name for the Devil)

'You knew, didn't you? I'm part of you?' — the Lord of the Flies speaks to Simon in a hallucinatory scene, confirming that evil is not external but innate; the grinning, fly-covered head is Golding's most powerful image of the corruption at the heart of human nature.

The signal fire

Hope of rescue, connection to civilisation, and the measure of the boys' commitment to returning to the adult world

'The fire is the most important thing on the island' — Ralph's insistence on maintaining the fire represents his commitment to civilisation; its decline tracks the boys' abandonment of hope, and its ironic role in the rescue (set to kill Ralph) is bitterly ambiguous.

The island itself

Initially an Eden or paradise — shaped like a boat, surrounded by a coral reef, lush with fruit — that gradually reveals its darker nature

The island is a microcosm of the world and a test of human nature — its Edenic qualities make the boys' fall more devastating; like the Garden of Eden, it offers everything needed for life but cannot prevent the corruption that comes from within.

Face paint

The mask that liberates Jack and the hunters from civilised identity and moral responsibility

'The mask was a thing on its own, behind which Jack hid, liberated from shame and self-consciousness' — the paint enables violence by erasing individual identity; it transforms the boys from named, responsible individuals into anonymous members of a savage tribe.

The parachutist

A dead airman from the war above, dragged across the mountaintop by his parachute — mistaken by the boys for the beast

The dead parachutist is the adult world's gift to the island — a corpse from a war, mistaken for a monster; Golding uses this figure to connect the boys' savagery to the larger savagery of adult civilisation, proving that the beast exists at every level of human society.

The scar

The mark left on the island by the crashed plane — 'a long scar smashed into the jungle'

The scar is civilisation's first mark on the island — a wound inflicted by technology and war; it foreshadows the boys' own destruction of the landscape and establishes from the opening page that their arrival is an act of damage, not discovery.

Ralph's hair

Ralph's growing, unkempt hair becomes a recurring irritation and symbol of his distance from civilisation

'He would like to have a pair of scissors and cut this hair... He pushed the mass back and felt its weight' — the hair is a physical marker of time passing and civilisation receding; Ralph's frustration with it represents his clinging to standards the other boys have abandoned.

Simon's clearing

A hidden, butterfly-filled glade deep in the forest where Simon retreats alone — later the site of the Lord of the Flies

The clearing is initially a place of natural beauty and spiritual peace — Simon's private Eden; its transformation into the site of the pig's head offering shows how the boys' savagery corrupts even the most pristine spaces, leaving nowhere untouched by the darkness within.

Darkness and shadow

"The darkness of the island was full of claws, full of the awful unknown and menace" / "Darkness poured out, submerging the ways between the trees"

Darkness operates on both literal and symbolic levels — the boys' fear of the dark is childishly real, but it also represents the unknown within themselves; Golding uses darkness as a persistent motif for the ignorance and evil that the boys cannot escape because it is part of them.

Higher Concepts

Concept

Explanation / Example

Application in Lord of the Flies

Original sin / innate evil

The Christian doctrine that humanity is born with an inherent tendency toward evil, inherited from the Fall of Adam and Eve

'Maybe there is a beast... maybe it's only us' — Simon's tentative insight articulates Golding's central thesis: that evil is not imposed from outside but is innate to human nature; the island is Eden, and the boys re-enact the Fall without any serpent but their own nature.

Civilisation vs savagery

The central tension of the novel: the fragile structures of order (rules, assemblies, the conch) against the primal pull toward violence and domination

'Which is better — to have rules and agree, or to hunt and kill?' — Piggy's desperate question crystallises the novel's central opposition; Golding's answer is bleak: savagery wins not because it is stronger but because civilisation requires constant effort while savagery is the default.

Democracy vs dictatorship

Ralph's elected leadership and assembly-based governance is progressively undermined by Jack's charismatic, fear-based authoritarianism

The political allegory reflects the twentieth century's struggle between democracy and fascism — Jack offers the boys simple, visceral satisfactions (hunting, feasting, belonging) that democracy's rational demands (fire-keeping, shelter-building) cannot match, warning that democracy is inherently vulnerable to demagogues.

The beast within

The boys project their own fear and violence onto an imagined external monster, unable to recognise that the true beast is their own capacity for evil

'Fancy thinking the Beast was something you could hunt and kill!' — the Lord of the Flies tells Simon the truth the others cannot face; the externalisation of evil is Golding's critique of humanity's refusal to accept moral responsibility for its own darkness.

Loss of innocence

The boys arrive as schoolchildren and depart as murderers — their innocence is systematically destroyed by their own actions

'Ralph wept for the end of innocence, the darkness of man's heart' — the novel's final line confirms that the loss of innocence is permanent and irreversible; the knowledge Ralph gains on the island cannot be unlearned, and childhood's comforting illusions are shattered forever.

Mob mentality

Simon's murder is committed not by individuals but by the group acting as a single, frenzied entity — 'the throb and stamp of a single organism'

Golding shows how group identity dissolves individual moral responsibility — even Ralph and Piggy participate in Simon's killing; the chanting, dancing, and collective frenzy demonstrate that moral conscience is an individual faculty that cannot survive the pressure of the crowd.

Power and corruption

Jack's transformation from choirboy to painted tribal chief, and Roger's evolution from restrained stone-thrower to executioner

'Roger's arm was conditioned by a civilisation that knew nothing of him and was in ruins' — power without accountability produces cruelty; Golding demonstrates that the restraints on violence are entirely external (social taboo, law, punishment), and once removed, the appetite for dominance is limitless.

The id / ego / superego

Freudian reading: Jack represents the id (primal desire), Ralph the ego (mediating rationality), Piggy the superego (moral and intellectual conscience), and Simon the spiritual unconscious

The novel dramatises the Freudian model of the psyche — the boys' conflict can be read as an externalisation of the internal struggle between instinct, reason, and morality; the id's triumph over the ego and superego represents the collapse of the civilised mind.

Allegory of WWII

Written in 1954, the novel responds directly to the horrors of World War II, the Holocaust, and the atomic bomb — the boys are evacuated because of a nuclear war

The dead parachutist literally brings the adult war to the island — Golding, who served in the Royal Navy and witnessed D-Day, wrote the novel as a response to the question of how civilised nations could commit atrocities; the answer is that savagery is not a failure of civilisation but its shadow.

The noble savage (inverted)

Rousseau's concept that humans are naturally good and corrupted by society — Golding directly inverts this, arguing that humans are naturally savage and restrained only by society

The novel is Golding's explicit rejection of Rousseau — removing society does not reveal noble savages but predatory ones; the boys do not return to a state of natural virtue but descend into tyranny, murder, and tribal warfare, arguing that civilisation is humanity's greatest and most precarious achievement.

Rational vs irrational

Piggy's insistence on logic, science, and rational explanation is overwhelmed by the boys' embrace of superstition, ritual, and emotional frenzy

'Life is scientific, that's what it is' — Piggy's rationalism is correct but powerless; Golding shows that reason alone cannot overcome irrational fear and desire, and that the Enlightenment faith in human rationality is dangerously naive about the strength of the irrational.

The thin veneer of civilisation

Golding's central philosophical argument: that civilised behaviour is a surface layer easily stripped away to reveal the savagery beneath

'Roger gathered a handful of stones and began to throw them... there was a space round Henry... into which he dare not throw. Here, invisible yet strong, was the taboo of the old life' — this passage is Golding's thesis in miniature: social conditioning restrains violence, but the restraint is 'invisible' and fragile; once it breaks, nothing internal replaces it.