Language
Technique
Example
What It Reveals
Legal language
"Is it so nominated in the bond?" / "The pound of flesh which I demand of him / Is dearly bought; 'tis mine, and I will have it"
Shylock's insistence on the precise legal wording of the bond reveals his reliance on the letter of the law as his only protection in a society that denies him other forms of justice. It also foreshadows Portia's eventual defeat of him through the same rigid literalism.
Commercial / mercantile imagery
"My ventures are not in one bottom trusted" / "I am a tainted wether of the flock, / Meetest for death"
Venice is saturated with the language of trade, profit, and risk. Antonio's commercial metaphors reveal a world where human relationships are transactional — love, friendship, and marriage are all measured in economic terms.
Religious language
"The quality of mercy is not strained; / It droppeth as the gentle rain from heaven" / "The devil can cite Scripture for his purpose"
Both Christians and Shylock invoke religion to justify their positions. Portia's mercy speech draws on Christian theology, while Antonio's dismissal of Shylock as devilish exposes the way religion is weaponised to exclude and persecute the outsider.
Metaphor
"All that glisters is not gold" / "I hold the world but as the world, Gratiano; / A stage where every man must play a part, / And mine a sad one"
Shakespeare uses metaphor to explore the gap between appearance and reality — the casket inscription warns against superficial judgement, while Antonio's theatrical metaphor reveals his melancholy and sense of performing a role rather than living authentically.
Simile
"How like a fawning publican he looks!" / "The moon shines bright. In such a night as this, / When the sweet wind did gently kiss the trees"
Shylock's bitter simile reveals his contempt for Antonio's outward piety, seeing hypocrisy beneath the surface. In contrast, Lorenzo's lyrical similes in Act 5 create the harmonious Belmont world that Shylock is permanently excluded from.
Rhetorical questions
"Hath not a Jew eyes? Hath not a Jew hands, organs, dimensions, senses, affections, passions?" / "If you poison us, do we not die?"
Shylock's devastating sequence of rhetorical questions forces the audience to confront the humanity they share with him. The questions are unanswerable — their very simplicity exposes the irrationality of prejudice.
Repetition
"My daughter! O my ducats! O my daughter!" / "I'll have my bond. Speak not against my bond"
Shylock's repetitions reveal his obsessive grief and determination. The intertwining of 'daughter' and 'ducats' has been used to mock him, but also reveals the depth of his loss — Jessica has taken both his wealth and his identity as a father.
Antithesis
"The quality of mercy is not strained" vs "My deeds upon my head! I crave the law" / "To bait fish withal; if it will feed nothing else, it will feed my revenge"
Shakespeare structures the play's central conflict through antithesis — mercy vs justice, love vs hate, Christian vs Jew, Belmont vs Venice. These oppositions drive the drama but also reveal that the boundaries between them are less clear than the Christian characters assume.
Puns / wordplay
"In sooth, I know not why I am so sad" (sooth = truth) / "Who chooseth me shall get as much as he deserves" / Portia's "gentle" punning on "Gentile"
Shakespeare's wordplay operates on multiple levels — Portia's pun on 'gentle/Gentile' when praising Bassanio subtly reinforces the play's religious divisions even in moments of apparent romance, revealing how deeply anti-Semitism is embedded in the language itself.
Imperative verbs
"Tarry a little; there is something else" / "Go in, Nerissa; / Give order to my servants" / "Proceed to judgement"
Commands reveal power dynamics — Portia's imperatives in the trial scene demonstrate her control over the courtroom and over Shylock's fate. Shylock's own imperatives ('Proceed to judgement') are those of a man who believes the law is on his side, making his defeat more devastating.
Emotive language
"You take my house when you do take the prop / That doth sustain my house; you take my life / When you do take the means whereby I live"
Shylock's emotionally charged language in the trial scene forces the audience to feel the weight of what is being taken from him. The escalating structure — house, life, means — reveals that the Christians' 'mercy' is in practice a systematic destruction of his entire existence.
Prose vs verse
Shylock often speaks in prose when conducting business; Portia and Bassanio speak verse in romantic scenes; Shylock shifts to verse in his 'Hath not a Jew eyes?' speech
Shakespeare uses the shift between prose and verse to signal emotional register. Shylock's move into verse during his most passionate speeches elevates his suffering to the level of tragic poetry, demanding the audience's empathy despite the play's comic framework.
Irony
"The Jew shall have all justice" / "Is that the law?" / Portia disguised as Balthasar: "Which is the merchant here, and which the Jew?"
Portia's ironic praise of justice to Shylock is devastating because she already knows how she will use the law against him. Her question about distinguishing merchant from Jew is deeply ironic — it suggests an equality that the play's society refuses to grant.
The Merchant of Venice — Writer’s Toolkit: Language — GCSE Literature Revision